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The given table depicts the comparison between the distinct languages such as English, Hindi, Mandarin Chinese, Spanish, Arabic Portuguese spoken by different native speakers. From an overall prospective, the maximum number of citizens shared their views in Mandarin Chinese; followed by, English, Hindi, Spanish and Arabic. Portuguese language was spoke by least individuals. As apparent from the diagram, Mandarin Chinese had spoken by 1090 million homo sapiens include, 990 million native speakers and 190 million additional speakers. However, 490 million people communicated in Hindi language; Spanish people 50 million lest than the Hindi. Mostly, people communicate in Mandarin language approximately, 900 million. It is further clear that, English individuals were 942 million; followed by, 603 million additional speakers and 339 million native speakers. Arabic and Portuguese speakers had varied by 17 million. Only 10 million additional persons spoke Portuguese language. 206, 203 million speaker communicate in Arabic and Portuguese language, respectively.
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table depicts the comparison between the distinct
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languages
such as English, Hindi, Mandarin Chinese, Spanish, Arabic Portuguese spoken by
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different
native speakers.

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overall
prospective, the maximum number of citizens shared their views in Mandarin Chinese; followed by, English, Hindi, Spanish and Arabic. Portuguese
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was
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spoke
by least individuals.

As apparent from the diagram, Mandarin Chinese had spoken by 1090
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homo sapiens include, 990
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million
native speakers and 190
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additional speakers.
However
, 490
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million
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people
communicated in Hindi
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; Spanish
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people
50
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lest
than the Hindi.
Mostly
,
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people
communicate in Mandarin
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approximately, 900 million.

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clear
that, English individuals were 942
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million
; followed by, 603
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additional speakers and 339
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native speakers. Arabic and Portuguese speakers had varied by 17
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.
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Only
10
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additional persons spoke Portuguese
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language
. 206, 203
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speaker
communicate in Arabic and Portuguese
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language
,
respectively
.
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6.0
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