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The plans below shows a home and plans for its redevelopment.

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The two maps illustrates the structural development and transformation of home before and after renovation. Looking at an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that home was changed and renovated with some Facilities to become a more convenient for members such as parking, as well as extra bedrooms. It can be seen that in previous layout of home, garden is placed behind and front of house. Moreover, living and study room is situated beside it. Another two bedoooms are the left to living room and South-East Corner closed to the kitchen. Doorway is west part attached with hall. Furthermore, bathroom is situated back north side of main hall. Regarding new plans, front side garden knocked down in order to build Parking and kitchen area is marginally extended. Living room pulled down to give birth to vast study boom and North-East bedroom transfered intos square. The margins of hall decreased and old bathroom place turn slight hall side. A new ensuit bathroom in hall and study room near entrance are added respectively.
The two maps illustrates the structural development and transformation of home
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before
and after renovation.

Looking at an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that home was
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changed
and renovated with
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some
Facilities to become a more convenient for members such as parking,
as well
as extra bedrooms.

It can be
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seen
that in previous layout of home, garden
is placed
behind and front of
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house
.
Moreover
, living and study
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room
is situated
beside it. Another two
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bedoooms
are the
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left
to living
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room
and South-East Corner closed to the kitchen. Doorway is west part attached with
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hall
.
Furthermore
, bathroom
is situated
back north side of main hall.

Regarding new plans, front side garden knocked down in order to build Parking and kitchen area is
marginally
extended. Living
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room
pulled down to give birth to vast study boom and North-East bedroom
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transfered
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intos
square. The margins of
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hall
decreased and
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old
bathroom place turn slight
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hall
side. A new
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ensuit
bathroom in
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hall
and study
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room
near entrance are
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added
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The plans below shows a home and plans for its redevelopment.

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171 words
6.0
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