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The graph shows the number of houses constructed in a particular area of UK.

The graph shows the number of houses constructed in a particular area of UK. 66D9x
The line graph depicts the total houses build in a specific area of UK Firstly, in 2010, number of detached homes (2000) was two times that of flats (1000) whereas 2000 semi detached homes and 1600 terraced homes were constructed this year. Moreover, establishment of detached homes and flats increased upto 2800 and 2000, respectively, in 2004but semi detached homes reached at 1800and terraced residential 1600. Apart from that, following fluctuations, total number of 2200 detached houses build in 2020 which was less than other years. Furthermore, number of flats build reach its peak 2800in last year and only 1800 semi detached homes and 1000 terraced houses constructed in 2020Overall, number of flats construction show an overall rising trend while other types houses establishment show an overall downward trend.
The line graph depicts the total
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build in a specific area of UK

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detached
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homes
(2000) was two times that of
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(1000) whereas 2000 semi
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detached
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homes
and 1600 terraced
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homes
were constructed
this year.
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, establishment of
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detached
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and
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flats
increased
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2800 and 2000,
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, in 2004but semi
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detached
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homes
reached at 1800and terraced residential 1600. Apart from that, following fluctuations, total
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number
of 2200
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detached
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houses
build in 2020 which was less than other years.
Furthermore
,
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number
of
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flats
build reach its peak 2800in last year and
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1800 semi
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detached
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homes
and 1000 terraced
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houses
constructed in 2020Overall,
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number
of
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flats
construction
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show
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overall
rising trend while other types
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establishment
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IELTS academic The graph shows the number of houses constructed in a particular area of UK.

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