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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. ElrnM
The first map is the current site plan of an airport and second map illustrates a proposed plan for redevelopment of this airport. Overall, there will be added some of facilities and extended the building to add additional gates after development next year. Now, the airport has less facilities such as check-in counter and cafe at departures area, while there is only 8 gates with walkway. In addition, security passport control office is located at departures and arrivals hall. After development, gates area will be extended to built extra 10 gates, whereas, walkway will be removed and constructed new sky train. Furthermore, shops will be add after security passport control office at departures hall. In side the departure call, cafe and check-in will be moved another location and bag drop point will be added at current check-in area. The arrivals, where will be added new facilities such as ATM points and cafe hall, will be slightly modified to add car hire. Moreover, number of gates at departures and arrivals will be doubled after development.
The
first
map is the
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current
site plan of an airport and second map illustrates a proposed plan for redevelopment of this airport.
Overall
, there will be
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added
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some of facilities
and extended the building to
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add
additional
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gates
after development
next
year.

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Now
, the airport has
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less
facilities such as
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check
-in counter and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
at
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departures
area, while there is
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only
8
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gates
with walkway.
In addition
, security passport control office
is located
at
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departures
and arrivals hall. After development,
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gates
area will
be extended
to built extra 10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gates
, whereas, walkway will
be removed
and constructed new sky train.
Furthermore
, shops will be
Consider using the past participle "added"?
add
after security passport control office at
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departures
hall. In side the
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departure
call,
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and
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check
-in will be
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moved
another location and bag drop point will be
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added
at
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current
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check
-in area. The arrivals, where will be
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added
new facilities such as ATM points and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
hall, will be
slightly
modified to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
car hire.
Moreover
, number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gates
at
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departures
and arrivals will
be doubled
after development.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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