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The information below shows the results of a new council speeding fine system in the town of Lanastone which was introduced in 1992.

The information below shows the results of a new council speeding fine system in the town of Lanastone which was introduced in 1992. aqm0G
The table and line graph illustrates changes in the road accidents, after the establishment of new council speeding fine system, which was introduced in the town of Lanastone, during 1992. Before the introduction of speeding fines, figure rose steadily from 250 to 300 accidents at the beginning of period to 1990. In 1995, the number of road mishaps fell down to 200 as the accidents perpetuators had to pay fine of 350. Over the next period, speeding fine increased considerably, which, surprisingly, had reduced the accidents on roads, and reached around 100, in the 2015. In addition to this, figure of road mishaps consistently fell, when people got charged excessively, between 1995 and 2015. Overall, it can be observed that highest accidents happened due to fine was established, however, number of accients started to decline when speeding fine system issued through the next period, in the town of Lanastone.
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, after the establishment of new council
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speeding
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system, which
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Lanastone
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, figure rose
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accidents
at the beginning of period to 1990. In 1995, the number of
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mishaps fell down to 200 as the
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perpetuators
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fine
of 350.

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speeding
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fine
increased
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, and reached around 100, in the 2015.
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mishaps
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people
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Lanastone
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IELTS academic The information below shows the results of a new council speeding fine system in the town of Lanastone which was introduced in 1992.

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