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The pictorial chart and bar chart enumerates the information about social issues from six different sector and investigating data to find action in mean time. The data has been calibrated in the forn of numbers.

The pictorial chart and bar chart enumerates the information about social issues from six different sector and investigating data to find action in mean time. The data has been calibrated in the forn of numbers. gYpwA
Overall, it has been clearly observed from first figure that the source of complaints by public was more as compared to others. In second figure, data investigation in 2001 for final action was more as comared to others. The first striking reason of social complaints by public covered slightly more than three fifth whereas, government agencies individuals raise their voice by 11% on the other hand, out of state people were one in ten count. Moreover, bank employees and media denizers complaint about anything were covered a minimum amount of proportion. However, 8% of people were involved by insurance companies. Turning toward remaning data, average time from investigating data to final action in 2000 was approximately 4. 5 and rest in three years such as 2002, 2003, and 2004 were 4. 5 respectively. But in 2001, it touch their peak value almost six in numbers
Overall
, it has been
clearly
observed from
first
figure that the source of complaints by public was more
as
compared to others. In second figure, data investigation in 2001 for final action was more
as
comared
to others.

The
first
striking reason of social complaints by public covered
slightly
more than three fifth whereas,
government
agencies individuals raise their voice by 11%
on the other hand
, out of state
people
were one in ten count.
Moreover
, bank employees and media
denizers
complaint about anything
were covered
a minimum amount of proportion.
However
, 8% of
people
were involved
by insurance
companies
.

Turning toward
remaning
data, average time from investigating data to final action in 2000 was approximately 4. 5 and rest in three years such as 2002, 2003, and 2004 were 4. 5
respectively
.
But
in 2001, it
touch
their peak value almost six in
numbers
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IELTS academic The pictorial chart and bar chart enumerates the information about social issues from six different sector and investigating data to find action in mean time. The data has been calibrated in the forn of numbers.

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