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The bar graph, shows the number of liteaceaty rare, in diffrent regions and gender in world, in 2011.

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The bar graph, shows the number of liteaceaty rare, in diffrent regions and gender in world, in 2011. Overall, the numbers differ a lot: we can see and undrastand some tgings from all gropus. In the central Asia litreacity rate is about 100%, and refer to the bar, this ia rge obly where femal's rate is nore thab male's. Central/Easteren Euruope does not differ a lot but thir rate is not as great as Central Asua is. Female's are equal with male's rate. East Asia/paccifux is the first place not seeing equal rates, Both are dropped, what is more, man's rate is just a little bit more than woman. In tgr latin America/Caraiban both ratws have fallen, woman's rate is about 9 in 10, man's about 100%. In the Arab States rates have decreased, both to 80%. In the South and West Asia, the main diffrence, can be seen. And at leasr, the lowestel rate is for Sub-sahran Africa. Overall, it's clear that tge best score is for Central Asua, the worat for sub-sahran Africa, probably caused by beinf overrayed and underrated
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