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The diagrams of a wind turbine and appropriate areas to install wind turbines.

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The diagrams show a component of a wind turbine and appropriate areas to install wind turbines. Overall, wind turbines can produce electricity, moreover, there are three places to install windmills that depend on the advantages which we need in various areas. The first picture describes the component of a turbine, first, blades are made of fibreglass or wood and it normally has three blades. Then, in the back of blades is an electricity generator that contains a wind sensor that is in charge of speed and direction control and it has capacity to generate energy for 1. 5 megawatts. Subsequently, steel power is a vertical pillar which connects computer buildings to detect the change of wind direction in order to adjust blade angle. For the second picture, it illustrates the areas to locate wind turbines. The first place is in the sea, the biggest advantage for this area is the landscape is not destroyed. Moving to domestic turbines, it generates the electricity for 100 kilowatts that suit the household usage. Finally, the turbine that builds in a high level of the sea, it can bring the maximum wind strengths to produce the energy.
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wind
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turbine
and appropriate areas to install
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wind
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turbines
.
Overall
,
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wind
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turbines
can produce electricity,
moreover
, there are three places to install windmills that depend on the advantages which we need in various areas.

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first
picture
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describes
the component of a
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turbine
,
first
,
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blades
are made
of
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fibreglass
or wood and it
normally
has three
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blades
. Then, in the back of
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blades
is an electricity generator that contains a
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wind
sensor
that is
in charge of speed and direction control and it has capacity to generate energy for 1. 5 megawatts.
Subsequently
, steel power is a vertical pillar which connects computer buildings to detect the
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change
of
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wind
direction in order to adjust
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blade
angle.

For the second picture, it illustrates the areas to locate
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wind
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turbines
. The
first
place is in the sea, the biggest advantage for this area is the landscape is not
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destroyed
. Moving to domestic
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turbines
, it generates the electricity for 100 kilowatts that suit the household usage.
Finally
, the
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turbine
that builds in a high level of the sea, it can bring the maximum
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wind
strengths to produce the energy.
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IELTS academic The diagrams of a wind turbine and appropriate areas to install wind turbines.

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193 words
6.5
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