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the plans below show the site of an airport

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The picture illustrate infromation about future improvement plan of the site of the airport which goint to be realised in the next year. Overall, it can be seen that after deveolpment, airpot going to be expanded and include more places for more opportunietis and comfort of guests. Such as: bag drop, shops, sky trains, car hire and ATM. Looking at the details, on the left side of the airport there will be added extra deaprtures, bag drop and check-in will be relockated. Moreover, on the top of security passport control will be builed a shop. On the right side of the airplan there are nothing but in the future there goint to be cafe, atm machine and car hire on the right down corner. Also, the main develoment of the future airport is the sky train that was walkway. Because of it, the amount of gates will be more and the airport will be as much bigger than now.
The picture illustrate
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infromation
about future improvement plan of the site of the
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airport
which
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goint
to be
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realised
in the
next
year.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that after
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deveolpment
,
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airpot
going to
be expanded
and include more places for more
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opportunietis
and comfort of guests. Such as: bag drop, shops, sky trains, car hire and ATM.

Looking at the
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details
, on the
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left
side of the
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airport
there will be
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added
extra
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deaprtures
, bag drop and
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check
-in will be
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relockated
.
Moreover
, on the top of security passport control will be
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builed
a shop.

On the right side of the
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airplan
there are nothing
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but
in the future there
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goint
to be
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cafe
,
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atm machine
and car hire on the right down corner.
Also
, the main
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develoment
of the future
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airport
is the sky train that was walkway.
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Because
of it, the amount of gates will be more and the
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airport
will be as much bigger than
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now
.

IELTS academic the plans below show the site of an airport

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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