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Merits and demerits of family business

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Passing down a family business from generation to generation is an most following trend around the globe. Several people found this trend beneficial whilst many are not in favour of this phenomena. This essay will illustrates my views on this phenomena. On the hand, people find family business as a source of generating maximum profit. Firstly, it is taken as stable, trustworthy business by society. As a result, many customers prefer these family business and become their regular client. Consequently, this maximizes the income of retailer running the family business. For instance, Nishat group of companies is running from ages
Passing down a
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from generation to generation is
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found this trend beneficial whilst
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phenomena. This essay will
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illustrates
my views on
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phenomena. On the hand,
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people
find
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family
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business
as a source of generating maximum profit.
Firstly
, it
is taken
as stable, trustworthy
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business
by society.
As a result
,
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many
customers prefer these
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family
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business
and become their regular client.
Consequently
, this maximizes the income of retailer running the
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family
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business
.
For instance
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