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The charts illustrate the amount of households with electrical appliances like washing machine, refrigerator and vacuume cleaner and number of hours spend per week per houshold in a country between year 1920 and 2019. The data has been calibrated in percentage.

The charts illustrate the amount of households with electrical appliances like washing machine, refrigerator and vacuume cleaner and number of hours spend per week per houshold in a country between year 1920 and 2019. The data has been calibrated in percentage. 2RLEo
The charts illustrate the amount of households with electrical appliances like washing machine, refrigerator and vacuume cleaner and number of hours spend per week per houshold in a country between year 1920 and 2019. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, refrigerator was one of the most one used appliance in year between 1920-2019, while washing machine found the least famous one throughout that period. Whereas, in 1920 number of housework was the highest one per household, while in the year 2019, it found the lowest one. It is quite clear from the first chart the usage of the refrigerator and vacuume cleaner were increased rapidly from 1920 to 2019. In the year 1920 the percentage of using refrigerator was only 0-10 percentage, which has increased by 100 percent by the end of the year 2019. In addition, the percentage of vacuume cleaner was also increased from 30 to 100 percent. On the other hand, the usage of washing machine was about 40 percent in the year 1920, which has increased intially by 10 percent then slightly decreased in the year 1980. The second chart provides the information that in the year 1920, number of hours of housework was 50, which has decreased heavily by 40 in the year 1950. Also, there was a rapid decrement of hours of housework per household from the year 1980 to 2019.
The charts illustrate the amount of households with electrical appliances like washing machine,
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refrigerator
and
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vacuume
cleaner and number of hours spend per week per
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houshold
in a country between
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year
1920 and 2019. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
,
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refrigerator
was one of the most one
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used
appliance in
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year
between 1920-2019, while washing machine found the least
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famous
one throughout that period. Whereas, in 1920 number of housework was the highest one per household, while in the
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year
2019, it found the lowest one.

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clear
from the
first
chart the usage of the
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refrigerator
and
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vacuume
cleaner were
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increased
rapidly
from 1920 to 2019. In the
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year
1920 the percentage of using
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refrigerator
was
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only
0-10 percentage, which has
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increased
by 100
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percent
by the
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end
of the
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year
2019.
In addition
, the percentage of
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vacuume
cleaner was
also
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increased
from 30 to 100
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percent
.
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, the usage of washing machine was about 40
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percent
in the
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year
1920, which has
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increased
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intially
by 10
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percent
then
slightly
decreased in the
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year
1980.

The second chart provides the information that in the
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year
1920, number of hours of housework was 50, which has decreased
heavily
by 40 in the
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year
1950.
Also
, there was a rapid decrement of hours of housework per household from the
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year
1980 to 2019.
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