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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010 gwnl
The given both map display between 1990 and 2010 years construction of ground floor of museum. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the area experienced to change in stairs. According to the map, the most striking alteration has been to almost all parts of the museum. To the east part had large archaeology gallery in 1990, and this was turned into double places that were children's intrractive zone and paster display area in 2010. Then, Local history room witnessed to modify only in stairs after 20 years. Also, enterance was expanded campared to previous time. To the left of the enterance, museum office was added reception counter in 2010. After 20 years in ground floor of museum, lift was ablated that had been located between natural history and gift shop. And gift shop too was conjointed cafe. Additionally, statue was moved in the centre of museum. Interestingly, natural history room was only unchanged than other rooms
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both map display between 1990 and 2010 years construction of
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ground floor
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museum
.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the area experienced to
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change
in stairs. According to the map, the most striking alteration has been to almost all parts of the
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museum
. To the east part had large archaeology gallery in 1990, and this
was turned
into double places that were children's
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intrractive
zone and
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paster
display area in 2010. Then, Local history room witnessed to modify
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only
in stairs after 20 years.
Also
,
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enterance
was expanded
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campared
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left
of the
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enterance
,
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office was
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added
reception counter in 2010. After 20 years in
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ground floor
of
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museum
, lift
was ablated
that had
been located
between natural history and gift shop. And gift shop too was
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conjointed
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.
Additionally
, statue was
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moved
in the
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centre
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Interestingly
, natural history room was
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

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