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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at NRdg

There are three figures showing a number of structural changes that Secondary School since it was built in the fifties. In 1950 the education center had just the main building and a playground for kids. The side spaces were allocated to farmland and houses, and it was the year with the shortest school's territory. Thirty years later it got expanded, not only in space, but also in facilities for students. A new science block was built next to a car park, taking place on the previous houses complex. Also, a sports field was set up. Lastly, in the third year presented, the field of West Park School kept the same but distribution changed. Car parks took more relevance therefore sports field got reduced, as well as the playground. It is important to notice that the main building did not change along the years.

There are three figures showing a number of structural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that Secondary School since it was built
 in the fifties.

In 1950 the education center had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the main building and a playground for kids. The side spaces were allocated
 to farmland and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, and it was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 with the shortest school's territory.

Thirty years later it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 expanded, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in space, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 in facilities for students. A new science block was built
next
 to a car park, taking place on the previous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 complex. Also
, a sports field was set
 up.

Lastly
, in the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 presented, the field of West Park School This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 distribution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. Car parks took more relevance therefore
 sports field This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
, as well
 as the playground. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to notice that the main building did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 along the years. 