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The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban Indian in 2013,2015 and 2017.

The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban Indian in 2013, 2015 and 2017. bXLQ
The given bar chart depicts the literacy levels of Indians in terms of men and women, and it is categorised by rural and urban regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017. Overall, the literacy levels in India had an upward trend. Both urban-males and urban-females literacy levels were higher than those of rural males and females. In terms of male, in urban regions, males had higher literacy levels than in rural areas. Men's literacy levels in rural-regions rose significantly from 57. 80 to 77. 15 in the years given, While the literate rates of urban males increased steadily from 81. 09 to 88. 71 in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017 respectively. With regards to female, rural women's literacy rate was considerably lower than those living in urban regions. Women's literacy rate experienced a rise from 30. 62 to 57. 93 by 2017. In contrast, the urban-females literacy rate increased gradually from 64. 05 to 79. 22 over the three years.
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men
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and
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regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017.

Overall
, the
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literacy
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levels
in India had an upward trend. Both urban-males and urban-females
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literacy
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levels
were higher than those of
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rural
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males
and females.

In terms of male, in
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urban
regions,
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males
had higher
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literacy
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levels
than in
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rural
areas.
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's
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literacy
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levels
in rural-regions rose
significantly
from 57. 80 to 77. 15 in the years
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, While the literate
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rates
of
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urban
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males
increased
steadily
from 81. 09 to 88. 71 in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017
respectively
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female,
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rural
women's
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rate
was
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lower than those living in
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urban
regions. Women's
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literacy
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rate
experienced a rise from 30. 62 to 57. 93 by 2017.
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, the urban-females
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literacy
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rate
increased
gradually
from 64. 05 to 79. 22 over the three years.

IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban Indian in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

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