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The given bar chart depicts the literacy levels of Indians in terms of men and women, and it is categorised by rural and urban regions in the years 2013,2015 and 2017.

The given bar chart depicts the literacy levels of Indians in terms of men and women, and it is categorised by rural and urban regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017. 2M9J
The given bar chart depicts the literacy levels of Indians in terms of men and women, and it is categorised by rural and urban regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017. Overall, the literacy levels in India had an upward trend. Both urban-males and urban-females literacy levels were higher than those of rural males and females. In terms of male, in urban regions, males had higher literacy levels than in rural areas. Men's literacy levels in rural-regions rose significantly from 57. 80 to 77. 15 in the years given. While the literate rate of urban males increased steadily from 81. 09 to 88. 71 in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017 respectively.
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by rural and urban regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017.

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, the
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literacy
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levels
in India had an upward trend. Both urban-males and urban-females
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literacy
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levels
were higher than those of rural
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males
and females.

In terms of male, in urban regions,
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had higher
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literacy
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levels
than in rural areas.
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Men
's
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literacy
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levels
in rural-regions rose
significantly
from 57. 80 to 77. 15 in the years
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males
increased
steadily
from 81. 09 to 88. 71 in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017
respectively
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IELTS academic The given bar chart depicts the literacy levels of Indians in terms of men and women, and it is categorised by rural and urban regions in the years 2013, 2015 and 2017.

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