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The table illustrates the earning of a small restaurant in downtown business district for one week of October.

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The table illustrates the earning of a small restaurant in downtown business district for one week of October. Overall, it is evident from the table that the restaurant earn maximum on Friday and minimum on weekends. Additionally, the earning on dinner is significantly higher than lunch in all the days. Firstly, from Monday to Thursday the income of restaurant keep fluctuating dramatically around $6300. Whereas, the maximum earning on lunch is on Wednesday of about $2595, on dinner it is on Tuesday that is about $3850. On the other hand, highest sale was recorded on Friday with $2500 for lunch and $4350 for dinner. However, on weekends the sale was unexpectedly low with $4850 and $4000 on Saturday and Sunday respectively. In addition, the earning from dinner is higher than compared to lunch throughout the week. Finally, it seems that people in the district prefer to eat at home on Sunday. Thus, earning on Sunday is the least in the whole week with $1550 from lunch and $2450 from dinner.
The table illustrates the
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restaurant in downtown business district for one week of October.

Overall
, it is evident from the table that the restaurant earn maximum on Friday and minimum on weekends.
Additionally
, the
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earning
on
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dinner
is
significantly
higher than lunch in all the days.

Firstly
, from Monday to Thursday the income of restaurant
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keep
fluctuating
dramatically
around $6300. Whereas, the maximum
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on lunch is on Wednesday of about $2595, on
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dinner
it is on Tuesday
that is
about $3850.

On the other hand
,
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highest
sale
was recorded
on Friday with $2500 for lunch and $4350 for
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dinner
.
However
, on weekends the sale was
unexpectedly
low with $4850 and $4000 on Saturday and Sunday
respectively
.
In addition
, the
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earning
from
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dinner
is higher than compared to lunch throughout the week.

Finally
, it seems that
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people
in the district prefer to eat at home on Sunday.
Thus
,
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earning
on Sunday is the least in the whole week with $1550 from lunch and $2450 from
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dinner
.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the earning of a small restaurant in downtown business district for one week of October.

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5 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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