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The graph below illustrates two tiped of households, one is owned accommodation, another is rented accommodation by percentage between 1928 and 2011 in England and Wales.

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The graph below illustrates two tiped of households, one is owned accommodation, another is rented accommodation by percentage between 1928 and 2011 in England and Wales. Overall, in 1928 there is the lowest percentage of households in owned accommodation approximately 22%. However, It is soared next years. In 2001 households in owned accommodation is leading roughly by 69%. But households in rented accommodation in England and Wales are much more popular from 1918-1961 respectively(77%-59%). Somehow, in 1971, both of them, owned and rented ones are remained flat(50%). So, we can conclude that in past times it was famous to rented accommodation than owned. After 1971, the percentage of rented accomodations plummeted. It almost halfted. The number of owned accomodations in 1939 is equally owned ones in 1991(by68%) To sum up everything that has been stated, this graph clearly demonstrated results of time from 1918 to 2021 and the habits of accommodate. Now people are more tend to have their own homes than in past. The number of owned accommodation is rocketed after 1981.
The graph below illustrates two
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households
, one is
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owned
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accommodation
, another
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accommodation
by percentage between 1928 and 2011 in England and Wales.

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, in 1928 there is the lowest percentage of
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
approximately 22%.
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next
years. In 2001
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
is leading roughly by 69%.
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But
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households
in rented
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accommodation
in England and Wales are much more popular from 1918-1961
respectively
(77%-59%). Somehow, in 1971, both of them,
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owned
and rented ones
are remained
flat(50%).
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, we can conclude that in past times it was
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famous
to rented
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accommodation
than
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owned
. After 1971, the percentage of rented
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accomodations
plummeted. It almost
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halfted
. The number of
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owned
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accomodations
in 1939 is
equally
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owned
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ones
in 1991(by68%)

To sum up everything that has
been stated
, this graph
clearly
demonstrated results of time from 1918 to 2021 and the habits of accommodate.
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Now
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people
are more tend to have their
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own
homes than
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in past
. The number of
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owned
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accommodation
is rocketed
after 1981.
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IELTS academic The graph below illustrates two tiped of households, one is owned accommodation, another is rented accommodation by percentage between 1928 and 2011 in England and Wales.

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