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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The above map of floor plan depicts information about a theatre in 2010 and in 2012 after renovations. Looking from an overall perspective, it is apparent that there was a general expansion of facilities allowing for both more customer-oriented business and staff activity. First noticable modification is enterance side where is the ticket office replaced by storage and in 2012, a new large restaurant accopying previous empty space. By 2012 storage room had moved from its previous place which located in top right corner to the bottom left corner and area of storage room replaced for admin office The small theatre was centered around the large auditorium stay unchanged for its position both in 2010 and 2012. In additions, the dressing repositioned to smaller room in the north-western side which also introduced a room for showers. Meanwhile, the terriory of dressing room altered for coordination area.
The above map of floor plan depicts information about a
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theatre
in 2010 and in 2012 after renovations.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that there was a general expansion of facilities allowing for both more customer-oriented business and staff activity.

First
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noticable
modification is
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enterance
side where is the ticket office replaced by storage and in 2012, a new large restaurant
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accopying
previous empty space. By 2012 storage
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room
had
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moved
from its previous place which located in top right corner to the bottom
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left
corner and area of storage
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room
replaced for admin office

The
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small
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theatre
was centered
around the large auditorium stay unchanged for its position both in 2010 and 2012. In additions, the dressing repositioned to smaller
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room
in the north-western side which
also
introduced a
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room
for showers. Meanwhile, the
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terriory
of dressing
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room
altered for coordination area.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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