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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling used cans

The diagram illustrates the process of recycling used cans 7aAlA

Given is a flow-chart that illustrates the process of recycling used cans. There are a number of stages to the process, beginning with collecting used cans and ending with sending recycled cans to sell. First of all, used cans are collected by special transports in order to deliver them to the works which are specialized to clean, sort, shred and compress these collected cans. Then, the next stage is heating and melting them to make 2. 5 mm - 6 mm thick ribbons. After that, the ribbons can be rolled and made aluminium cans. Finally, after some stages such as labelling, they are sent to customers to use.

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Given
 is a flow-chart that illustrates the process of recycling This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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cans
. There are a number of stages to the process, beginning with collecting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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cans
 and ending with sending recycled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 to sell. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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cans
are collected
 by special transports in order to deliver them to the works which are specialized
 to clean, sort, shred and compress these collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
. Then, the next
 stage is heating and melting them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 2. 5 mm Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 6 mm thick ribbons. After that, the ribbons You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
be rolled
 and made Possible spelling mistake. 'aluminium' is British English.aluminum
aluminium
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cans
. Finally
, after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 stages such as labelling, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to customers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 