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The method of coffee making

The method of coffee making 0AW8q

This diagram represents the process of drying coffee production. Overall, there are twelve stages in this process. It starts from sorting coffee beans and ends with packing and making available for selling. Let’s look at every stage individually. First of all, it starts by sorting beans by hand. After that, beans need to be washed by using sieve which also requires hand labor. These beans are dried in the sun. Following this, beans are raked and turned so that the other side is dried as well. They are then sorted and stored in silo after which, it is sent to a mill by a truck. The next step is when these beans are hulled and graded. Then the beans are bagged and sold. Last but not least, beans are roasted in a roasting machine. Finally it gets packed and delivered to supermarkets to sell

This diagram represents the process of drying coffee production.

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starts
 from sorting coffee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 and ends with packing and making available for selling.

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’s look at every stage individually
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starts
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beans
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beans
 need to be washed
 by using sieve which also
 requires hand labor. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are dried
 in the sun. Following this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are raked
 and turned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the other side is dried
as well
. They are then sorted and stored in silo after which, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to a mill by a truck. The next
 step is when these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are hulled
 and graded. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are bagged
 and sold. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are roasted
 in a roasting machine. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
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gets
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sell