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The method of coffee making

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This diagram represents the process of drying coffee production. Overall, there are twelve stages in this process. It starts from sorting coffee beans and ends with packing and making available for selling. Let’s look at every stage individually. First of all, it starts by sorting beans by hand. After that, beans need to be washed by using sieve which also requires hand labor. These beans are dried in the sun. Following this, beans are raked and turned so that the other side is dried as well. They are then sorted and stored in silo after which, it is sent to a mill by a truck. The next step is when these beans are hulled and graded. Then the beans are bagged and sold. Last but not least, beans are roasted in a roasting machine. Finally it gets packed and delivered to supermarkets to sell
This diagram represents the process of drying coffee production.

Overall
, there are twelve stages in this process. It
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starts
from sorting coffee
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beans
and ends with packing and making available for selling.

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Let
’s look at every stage
individually
.
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First of all
, it
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starts
by sorting
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beans
by hand. After that,
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beans
need to
be washed
by using sieve which
also
requires hand labor. These
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beans
are dried
in the sun. Following this,
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beans
are raked
and turned
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so
that the other side
is dried
as well
. They are then sorted and stored in silo after which, it is
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sent
to a mill by a truck. The
next
step is when these
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beans
are hulled
and graded. Then the
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beans
are bagged
and sold. Last
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but
not least,
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beans
are roasted
in a roasting machine.
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Finally
it
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gets
packed and delivered to supermarkets to
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sell

IELTS academic The method of coffee making

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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