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The table below given information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table below given information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 7aAwA

The table illustrate the percentage of expenditure for three category of products and services in five countries 2002, overall the largest consumption of category which are food and drink in each country on the other hand leisure and education are the lowest percentages in the tables To begin with, out of the five countries the figure for food and drink showed the highest with 32, 14% while following by in Ireland 28, 91 respectively the proportion spending on leisure and education was also higher in Turkey whereas expenditure of clothes in Italy was significantly higher with 9% than any of the country It can be seen that, Sweden had the lowest percentages of consumer expenditure for food and drink at nearly 16 % and just over 5 % respectively. Spanish had slightly higher figure for these category but the lowest figure for leisure and education only 1. 98%

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. Spanish had slightly
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 1. 98%