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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. 5QYB

The plan illustrates, the layout of theatre in 2010 and 2012 Overall, it can be seen with respect to 2010 the theatre was enlarged, and certain facilities were replaced, added and extended in 2012 Firstly, in 2010 cafe' was in the right hand side of the main door. In 2012 it was changed into ticket office. However, ticket office of 2010 and front of the main door is developed into restaurant in 2012. On the other hand, theatre was expanded toward the left side in 2012. The Admin Office is now moves to then storage area, whereas storage is provided in the bottom corner of the expanded region in 2012. Moreover, dressing room which was at the backstage in 2010 was moved to upper corner of the expanded region in 2012. The area used for dressing then is now used for coordinating the stage show. Stage was also enlarged in 2012 when compared to 2010. Additionally, shower place is added at the left side of the stage in front of dressing room.

The plan illustrates, the layout of Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 in 2010 and 2012

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 with respect to 2010 the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
was enlarged
, and certain facilities were replaced
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and extended in 2012

Firstly
, in 2010 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
' was in the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
 side of the main door. In The comma is probably missing here: "2012, it".2012, it
2012 it
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into ticket office. However
, ticket office of 2010 and front of the main door is developed
 into restaurant in 2012.

On the other hand
, Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
was expanded
 toward the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side in 2012. The Admin Office is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 to then storage area, whereas storage is provided
 in the bottom corner of the expanded region in 2012. Moreover
, dressing room which was at the backstage in 2010 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to upper corner of the expanded region in 2012. The area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for dressing then is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for coordinating the stage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
. Stage was also
 enlarged in 2012 when compared to 2010. Additionally
, shower place is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the stage in front of dressing room. 