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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1 IELTS Writing Task 1

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. yp0g
The data provided to us portrays the major causes of land degradation in three regions namely north America, Europe and oceania which is commonly referred to as large group of islands in the south pacific which includes Australia and new zeland The data has been provided to us in two dimensions – worldwide and by regions. On the worldwide scale, we observe that overgrazing is the primary reason for land degradation followed by deforestation and over cultivation. There are secondary reasons which contributes to 7% of the cause. These activities disrupt the balance of the biosphere which tends to reduce the productivity arte of the land. While analysing the dta provided for the causes of land degradation by region, we observe that Europe is the most affected region seconded by oceania and followed by north America Europe is mostly affted die to deforestation and over cultivation while oceania is majorly affected by overgrazing.
The data provided to us portrays the major causes of land degradation in three regions
namely
north America
, Europe and
oceania
which is
commonly
referred to as large group of islands in the south pacific which includes Australia and new
zeland


The data has
been provided
to us in two dimensions
worldwide and by regions.

On the worldwide scale, we observe that overgrazing is the primary reason for land degradation followed by deforestation and over cultivation. There are secondary reasons which contributes to 7% of the cause. These activities disrupt the balance of the biosphere which tends to
reduce
the productivity
arte
of the land.

While
analysing
the
dta
provided for the causes of land degradation by region, we observe that Europe is the most
affected
region seconded by
oceania
and followed by
north America
Europe is
mostly
affted
die
to deforestation and over cultivation while
oceania
is
majorly
affected
by overgrazing.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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