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The line graph demonstrates the data regarding population growth and its projections for China, India, Europe and USA, starting 1950 up until 2050.

The line graph demonstrates the data regarding population growth and its projections for China, India, Europe and USA, starting 1950 up until 2050. jaOL

The line graph demonstrates the data regarding population growth and its projections for China, India, Europe and USA, starting 1950 up until 2050. Overall, number of people has increased in all four countries shown since 1950. China started at the highest point, around 600 million, while Europe had 100 million people less. The population in Europe was increasing steadily, when India’s citizenry skyrocketed from approximately 300 to over 700 million in 1980s, therefore outnumbering Europe. The population of United States was merely over 100 million in 1950, and during 70 years it rose gradually by roughly 250 million. By 2020, China’s and India’s number of citizens almost doubled and tripled respectively. On the other hand, the proportion of Europe’s population is starting to drop, and it is projected that it will continue to go down. In about 10 years, the forecast indicates India’s population will exceed China’s, and it will remain higher, whereas the percentage of people in China will fall for about 50 million from 2030 to 2050. At the same time, the citizenry of USA is predicted to grow from 300 to just over 400 million by 2050.

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