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United Nations study of social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 is presented in this table.

United Nations study of social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 is presented in this table. oKO9
United Nations study of social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 is presented in this table. The table illustrates that Japan is a country that has the highest rank in three from four indicators namely, an income per person per annum, an opportunity of childbirth, and literacy rate in adults. The number of calorie consumption daily, however, is showing that Canada is placed in the highest rank following by Japan, Peru, and Zaire. But Canada and Japan share its first rank on having most adults with an ability to read with 99% rate. While Zaire has less population than 50%. Zaire is the country that stays in the lowest rank in all dimensions compared with the others with a 34% of literacy rate in adults, 1, 749 kilocalories per day, low chance of childbirth with only 47%, and 130 $US income per year.
United Nations study of social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994
is presented
in this table.

The table illustrates that Japan is a country that has the highest
rank
in three from four indicators
namely
, an income per person per annum, an opportunity of childbirth, and literacy rate in adults.

The number of calorie consumption daily,
however
, is showing that Canada
is placed
in the highest
rank
following by Japan, Peru, and Zaire.

But
Canada and Japan share its
first
rank
on having most adults with an ability to read with 99% rate. While Zaire has less population than 50%.

Zaire is the country that stays in the lowest
rank
in all dimensions compared with the others with a 34% of literacy rate in adults, 1, 749 kilocalories per day, low chance of childbirth with
only
47%, and
130 $
US income per year.
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IELTS academic United Nations study of social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 is presented in this table.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
145 words
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