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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Meeo

The blueprint illustrates two types of accommodation for a student at an Australian university. Overall, it is clear that there are more leisure facilities in the room for two students and the room is also bigger. Moreover, its renting cost per student is less expensive than the room for one student. According to the student room for two people is larger, there are more furnishers in the room such as bookshelf, cupboard, table and chairs. But it also gives privacy for each student by separate their bed and desk. The cost for this room type is higher at $350/week, however, this price is for two person. While the student room for one person is $200/week which is more expensive in term of cost per one person because it is more privacy. They do not need to share a bathroom or kitchen area with others so the room is designed to a smaller size but suitable for one person.

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