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The plans below show the layound of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in2020

The plans below show the layound of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in2020 0PPG

It is clear that ground floor of a museum has changed considerably with the layout of the rooms and so new features can be seen in the two diagram. The main developments are museum accessible and visitors somewhere to visit. Looking at the maps in more details, we can see that small gift shops have been changed the cafe and gift shop. The other physical structures that have been added plaster display area building in the middle of the museum and state have been moved in centre of museum. Before this developments in the middle of gift shop lift constructed. As well as the buildings mentioned above the new facilities in the museum include a a pier archeolgy gallery reconstructed to children's interactive zone. Finally there is a designated reception counter and local history room the western corner of the museum

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
 with the layout of the rooms and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 new features can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the two diagram. The main developments are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 accessible and visitors somewhere to visit. Looking at the maps in more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 gift shops have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and gift shop. The other physical structures that have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 plaster display area building in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 and state have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
. “Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
Did you mean "these"?these
this
 developments in the middle of gift shop lift constructed. As well
 as the buildings mentioned above the new facilities in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 include Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "a" is left.a
a a
 pier Possible spelling mistake found.archeology
archeolgy
 gallery reconstructed to children's interactive zone. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 there is a designated reception counter and local history room the western corner of the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmuseum.museum!museum?museum:museum,museum;
museum