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The plans below show the layound of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in2020

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It is clear that ground floor of a museum has changed considerably with the layout of the rooms and so new features can be seen in the two diagram. The main developments are museum accessible and visitors somewhere to visit. Looking at the maps in more details, we can see that small gift shops have been changed the cafe and gift shop. The other physical structures that have been added plaster display area building in the middle of the museum and state have been moved in centre of museum. Before this developments in the middle of gift shop lift constructed. As well as the buildings mentioned above the new facilities in the museum include a a pier archeolgy gallery reconstructed to children's interactive zone. Finally there is a designated reception counter and local history room the western corner of the museum
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ground floor
of a
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museum
has
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changed
considerably
with the layout of the rooms and
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so
new features can be
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seen
in the two diagram. The main developments are
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museum
accessible and visitors somewhere to visit. Looking at the maps in more
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details
, we can
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see
that
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small
gift shops have been
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changed
the
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cafe
and gift shop. The other physical structures that have been
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added
plaster display area building in the middle of the
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museum
and state have been
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moved
in
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centre
of
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Before
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this
developments in the middle of gift shop lift constructed.
As well
as the buildings mentioned above the new facilities in the
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museum
include
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a a
pier
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archeolgy
gallery reconstructed to children's interactive zone.
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Finally
there is a designated reception counter and local history room the western corner of the
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museum

IELTS academic The plans below show the layound of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in2020

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