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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. aKK9

The given table illustrates the information about the consumer disbursement on various categories in the past. The data contains the percentage acquired by five countries on the distinct items in 2002. Overall, It is observed that people have mostly spent their money is on Food/Drinks/Tobacco which has the highest amount of percentage in all the five countries whereas Turkey and Ireland being the topmost in this category. In Turkey and Ireland, the lowest amount was spend on Leisure/Education which was 4. 35% and 2. 21% respectively. In Clothing/Footwear, they both have spent almost a same range i. e 6% while Turkey acquiring 32. 14% and Ireland had spent 28. 91% on Food/Drinks/Tobacco. However, In Italy, Spain and Sweden they have also consumed more of their expenditure on Food/Drinks/Tobacco but Sweden has acquired 2% more than Italy and Spain in this category. Notably, In Clothing/Footwear, they have spent 9%, 6. 51% and 5. 4% respectively. Whereas In Leisure/Education, Italy and Sweden both have occupied 3% each and Spain has only consumed 1. 98% in this category.

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 table illustrates the information about the consumer disbursement on various categories in the past. The data contains the percentage acquired by five countries on the distinct items in 2002.

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people
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spent
 their money is on Food/Drinks/Tobacco which has the highest amount of percentage in all the five countries whereas Turkey and Ireland being the topmost in this category.

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spend
 on Leisure/Education which was 4. 35% and 2. 21% respectively
. In Clothing/Footwear, they both have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 almost a same range i. e 6% while Turkey acquiring 32. 14% and Ireland had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 28. 91% on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.

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, In Italy, Spain and Sweden they have also
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 Sweden has acquired 2% more than Italy and Spain in this category. Notably
, In Clothing/Footwear, they have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 9%, 6. 51% and 5. 4% respectively
. Whereas In Leisure/Education, Italy and Sweden both have occupied 3% each and Spain has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 consumed 1. 98% in this category. 