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The given graph illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in six distinct educational establishments in the UK in 2019.

The given graph illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in six distinct educational establishments in the UK in 2019. dBGE
The given graph illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in six distinct educational establishments in the UK in 2019. Female teachers made up a significantly large proportion of the educators working in the educational systems dealing with younger students, namely nursery/pre-school and primary school. The gender gap in the two mentioned educational settings was particularly large, where there were virtually ten times as many female teachers as their male colleagues. The gender gap was narrower in the other four establishments to the extent that both men and women occupied the same number of teaching positions in college. Women were more willing to pursue their careers as secondary school educators, while the opposite was true for men when it came down to working in private training institutes. Finally, statistics indicate male professors outnumbered female professors by three to two. Overall, the chart shows that there were differences in the type of teaching positions in the UK in 2019.
The
given
graph illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in six distinct educational establishments in the UK in 2019.

Female teachers made up a
significantly
large proportion of the educators working in the educational systems dealing with younger students,
namely
nursery/
pre-school
and primary school. The gender gap in the two mentioned educational settings was
particularly
large, where there were
virtually
ten times as
many
female teachers as their male colleagues. The gender gap was narrower in the other four establishments to the extent that both
men
and women occupied the same number of teaching positions in college. Women were more willing to pursue their careers as secondary school educators, while the opposite was true for
men
when it came down to working in private training institutes.
Finally
, statistics indicate male professors outnumbered female professors by three to two.

Overall
, the chart
shows
that there were differences in the type of teaching positions in the UK in 2019.
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IELTS academic The given graph illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in six distinct educational establishments in the UK in 2019.

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6.5
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