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The plans below show a public plan when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The plans below show a public plan when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. K8kR
The given two maps illustrate Grange Park in 1920 and its current layout. Overall, Grange Park has seen extensive changes. Some places for recreation and entertainment has been added and expanded. Only one rose garden, located on the left side of the bottom entrance, the entrance has remained in the same spot. In 1920, Grand Park consisted of a fountain situated in the middle of the park, which has been removed and converted into the Rose garden with four seats encircled. Those seats, in 1920, were located on the left side of entrances and the left upper and lower corner, next to the Rose gardens. On the left part of the map, there was a stage for musicians which has been demolished to make space for an amphitheatre extension, where people can gather for concerts. In terms of the right part of the map, glasshouse, situated in the lower corner has been removed and turned into the water feature, whereas pond of water plants in the right upper corner has been removed and been transformed to children’s play area. Cafe, situated between the upper entrance and children’s play, has been replaced with a rose garden. Seats between pond of water plants and glasshouse were removed and in this place has been created an entrance for the underground car park.
The
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given
two maps illustrate Grange
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Park
in 1920 and its
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current
layout.

Overall
, Grange
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Park
has
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seen
extensive
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changes
.
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Some
places for recreation and entertainment has been
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added
and expanded.
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Only
one
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rose
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garden
, located on the
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left
side of the bottom
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entrance
, the
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entrance
has remained in the same spot.

In 1920, Grand
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Park
consisted of a fountain situated in the middle of the
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park
, which has been
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removed
and converted into the
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Rose
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garden
with four seats encircled. Those seats, in 1920,
were located
on the
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left
side of
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entrances
and the
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left
upper and lower corner,
next
to the
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Rose
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gardens
. On the
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left
part of the map, there was a stage for musicians which has
been demolished
to
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make
space for an
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amphitheatre
extension, where
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people
can gather for concerts.

In terms of the right part of the map, glasshouse, situated in the lower corner has been
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removed
and turned into the water feature, whereas pond of water plants in the right upper corner has been
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removed
and
been transformed
to children’s play area.
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Cafe
, situated between the upper
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entrance
and children’s play, has
been replaced
with a
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rose
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garden
. Seats between pond of water plants and glasshouse were
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removed
and in this place has
been created
an
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entrance
for the underground car
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park
.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a public plan when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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6.0
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