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The tables compare the total income per household and their expenditure on food and clothes in a UK city in 2010 and 2013.

The tables compare the total income per household and their expenditure on food and clothes in a UK city in 2010 and 2013. Mx0p
The tables compare the total income per household and their expenditure on food and clothes in a UK city in 2010 and 2013. The pie charts illustrate how spending on food and clothes was broken down into 5 different categories. Overall, the total income by UK household fell in 2013; whereas, the spending on food and clothes increased from 2010. The proportion of fruits and vegetables rose in 2013. In 2010, the amount of total income of UK family decreased by £4000 to £25, 000 in period 2010 to 2013. However, the expenditure of them on food and clothes saw a slight increase, reaching 15, 000 by 2013. Taking this expenditure on food and clothes, the proportion of both clothes and meat and fish declined by 10%, to reach 12% and 15% respectively. In contrast, the proportion of other food and beverages remained stable throughout the given period. Also, the figure for spending on fruits and vegetables and dairy products were slightly similar in 2010, at 20% and 15% respectively. Then, it saw notable growth in the same category to 35% for the former and 20% for the latter by 2013.
The tables compare the total income per household and their expenditure on
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food
and
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clothes
in a UK city in 2010 and 2013. The pie charts illustrate how spending on
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food
and
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clothes
was broken
down into 5
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different
categories.

Overall
, the total income by UK household fell in 2013; whereas, the spending on
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food
and
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clothes
increased from 2010. The proportion of fruits and vegetables rose in 2013.

In 2010, the amount of total income of UK family decreased by £4000 to £25, 000 in period 2010 to 2013.
However
, the expenditure of them on
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food
and
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clothes
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saw
a slight increase, reaching 15, 000 by 2013.

Taking this expenditure on
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food
and
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clothes
, the proportion of both
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clothes
and meat and fish declined by 10%, to reach 12% and 15%
respectively
.
In contrast
, the proportion of other
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food
and beverages remained stable throughout the
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given
period.

Also
, the figure for spending on fruits and vegetables and dairy products were
slightly
similar in 2010, at 20% and 15%
respectively
. Then, it
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saw
notable growth in the same category to 35% for the former and 20% for the latter by 2013.
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IELTS academic The tables compare the total income per household and their expenditure on food and clothes in a UK city in 2010 and 2013.

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