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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the public garden namely Grange Park from 1920 to the present day. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a traditional to a modern one. In 1920, there was a garden in the middle of a park, which is replaced by a rose garden, and a sitting area which was all around the park are removed and placed along with the rose garden. Moreover, the stage which was located in west demolished to make way for a theatre for concerts. Furthermore, the rose garden is disappeared from the southwest. In 1920, there was a pond in the northeast, which is disappeared, and a children's play area has appeared, and beside this newly café is opened. In the south, there was a glasshouse; it is knocked down, and a water feature is placed there. Further development is the car park; this is established underground at the east side of the park. However, entrance at north and south is remained the same.

The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
namely
 Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 from 1920 to the present day.

Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a traditional to a modern one.

In 1920, there was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the middle of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, which is replaced
 by a rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
, and a sitting area which was all around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
are removed
 and placed along with the rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
. Moreover
, the stage which was located
 in west demolished to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a Possible spelling mistake. ‘theatre’ is British English.theater
theatre
 for concerts. Furthermore
, the rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
is disappeared
 from the southwest.

In 1920, there was a pond in the northeast, which is disappeared
, and a children's play area has appeared, and beside this newly
 café is opened
. In the south, there was a glasshouse; it is knocked
 down, and a water feature is placed
 there. Further
 development is the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
; this is established
 underground at the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. However
, entrance at north and south is remained
 the same. 