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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The pie chart represents the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats, and sugars in common meals consumed in the USA, all of three nutrients may be unhealthy when It’s over-consumed. There are total of 3 pie charts showing nutrients like sodium, fat, and sugar. All of which show the percentage of it being included in the everyday meal, including breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snack. The pie chart shows us that during breakfast, the highest percentage of nutrients are both saturated fats and sugar over 15%, while sodium was also included in the meal with 14%. During Lunch, the percentage of sodium has the highest percentage with 29%, saturated fat with 26%, and the lowest is sugar with 19%. Next, according to the dinner portion from the pie chart, Sodium still remained as the most nutrients with 43%, while saturated fat remained as the second highest with 37%, and the lowest is sugar with 23%. Lastly, during snack time, Sugar skyrocketed with 43%, saturated fat with 21%, and the least consumed is sodium with 14%
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represents the average
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of sodium,
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saturated
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fats
, and
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sugars
in common meals consumed in the USA, all of three
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nutrients
may be unhealthy when It’s over-consumed.

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total
of 3
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showing
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nutrients
like sodium,
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fat
, and
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sugar
. All of which
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being included
in the everyday meal, including breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snack.

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us that during breakfast, the highest
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of
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nutrients
are both
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saturated
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fats
and
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sugar
over 15%, while sodium was
also
included in the meal with 14%. During Lunch, the
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percentage
of sodium has the highest
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percentage
with 29%,
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saturated
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fat
with 26%, and the lowest is
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sugar
with 19%.
Next
, according to the dinner portion from the
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chart
, Sodium
still
remained as the most
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nutrients
with 43%, while
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saturated
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fat
remained as the second highest with 37%, and the lowest is
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sugar
with 23%.
Lastly
, during snack time,
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Sugar
skyrocketed with 43%,
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saturated
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fat
with 21%, and the least consumed is sodium with 14%
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IELTS academic The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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