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The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

The graph shows the employment rate among men and women workers in three different countries from 2005 to 2015. Overall the highest work available for women had been in Canada with a little above 50% in 2015, for men the country is South Korea almost 80% of the male force had a job. In comparison with 2005, both countries had grown 15% in the former one and 4% in the latter. Sweden had a tiny swift in the balance of the workforce, males job had been reduced from close to 80% to 70%, in contrast, females had smoothly increased from 45% to 50%. In contrast with South Korea and Canada where both segments of the population had been rising, South Korea with a slower pace 5% all in all meanwhile Canada with a higher gains for males 10% and for women above 15%.

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 the country is South Korea almost 80% of the male force had a job. In comparison
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