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the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relavant

These pictures illustrate the procedure of restrictions in Gange park until now. Overall, it seems some modernization changes that have done in parkInitially, from west of the maps, there is a recent amphitheature for holding concerts with more seats which is instead of old stage. In the center of map, it could be seen a fountain before that has knocked down in order to built Rose garden. Subsequently, there was not any cafe or resturant in advance which constructing a cafe at the north-east of the park was a faboules remark. Furthermore, one of the best transmition was eliminate water plants area in order to build a playing space for children at the east of the park. At the end but not the least was instead of historical fountain and glasshouse, making water feature was a great idea. How amazing that undergo car park entrance is a new transmission facility.
These pictures illustrate the procedure of restrictions in Gange
park
until
now
.
Overall
, it seems
some
modernization
changes
that have done in
parkInitially
, from west of the maps, there is a recent amphitheature for holding concerts with more seats which is
instead
of
old
stage. In the center of map, it could be
seen
a fountain
before
that has knocked down in order to built Rose garden.
Subsequently
, there was not any cafe or resturant in advance which constructing a cafe at the north-east of the
park
was a faboules remark.
Furthermore
, one of the best transmition was eliminate water plants area in order to build a playing space for children at the east of the
park
. At the
end
but
not the least was
instead
of historical fountain and glasshouse, making water feature was a great
idea
. How amazing that undergo car
park
entrance is a new transmission facility.

IELTS academic the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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