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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie chart represent the drastic change in housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Shelter in one of the basic need of every human and plays important role in the way of their living life. People living in UK during the 25 years gap between 1991 to 2007 there is a drastic change in the housing, almost maximum people wants to be onwer of their house either in 1991 or 2007. Home owner rate in well increased between these years. Being owner of your house gives them more security and freedom, but there is a slight decrement in the soical renting in 2007 where pepole prefered as second highest choice in 1991, whereas there is no change in private renting of houses in these years. scoical housing also shows a decline in 2007 comparing with 1991 which makes use understand society is not prefering scocial housing.
The pie chart represent the drastic
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in housing
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owned
and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Shelter in one of the basic need of every human and plays
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important
role in the way of their living life.
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People
living in UK during the 25 years gap between 1991 to 2007 there is a drastic
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change
in the housing, almost maximum
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people
wants to be onwer of their
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house
either in 1991 or 2007. Home owner rate in well increased between these years. Being owner of your
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house
gives them more security and freedom,
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but
there is a slight decrement in the soical renting in 2007 where pepole prefered as second highest choice in 1991, whereas there is no
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change
in private renting of
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houses
in these years. scoical housing
also
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shows
a decline in 2007 comparing with 1991 which
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makes
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understand society is not prefering scocial housing.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.

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151 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.