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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. maRN

The line graph illustrates the consumption of three types of fast food (pizza, fish and chips, hamburgers) by Australian teenagers between the years 1975 and 2000. Overall, pizza and hamburgers followed an upward trend meanwhile fish and chips experienced a downward trend. Fish and chips were the most popular among all mentioned fast food in the first year of the graph. It was 100 times eaten per the year 1975 by Australian teenagers. In 1980 it decreased to slightly above 80 times and after 5 years it rose back to almost 100. Next, this food reached the lowest point in 2000 with under 40 times of consuming, this was also the least preferred food in this year. Consuming of pizza start lightly above number 5, then it steadily increased to under 80 times of eating per the year 1995. Moreover, this food remained steady until the year 2000. The consumption of hamburgers dramatically grew from about 5 times to above 80 times in 1985. Then it slowly reached a peak under 100 times. Furthermore, a hamburger was/hamburgers were the most favorite food among Australian teenagers in 2000.

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, pizza and hamburgers followed an upward trend meanwhile fish and chips experienced a downward trend.

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