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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The above two pie charts illustrates the information about two dishes, that how much nutrients each dish contains such as carbohydrates, saturated fat, glucose, protein and other nutrients. Medium baked potato contains maximum amount of carbohydrates(35%). While carbohydrates is maximum in potato saturated fat is least in it. On the other protein, glucose and other nutrients collectively contains 55% of whole. In comparison to Macroni dish, Maximum stack is with carbohydrates that is 52% but the least is with other nutrients(5%) instead of saturated fat in medium baked potato. While protein is second highest in medium baked potato, saturated fat is second from top in Macroni consisting of 21% of whole. Glucose is 4% more in potato in comparison to that of Macroni, also protein is 14% less in Macroni than Medium baked potatoes. Though carbohydrates is maximum in both the dishes still the amount of carbohydrates in Macroni is slightly more than medium baked potato. Task 2
The above two pie charts illustrates the information about two
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dishes
, that how
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much
nutrients each
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dish
contains such as
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carbohydrates
,
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saturated
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fat
, glucose, protein and
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other
nutrients.

Medium
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baked
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potato
contains maximum amount of
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carbohydrates(35%)
.
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While
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carbohydrates
is maximum in
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potato
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saturated
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fat
is least in it. On the
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other
protein, glucose and
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other
nutrients
collectively
contains 55% of whole.

In comparison
to
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Macroni
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dish
, Maximum stack is with
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carbohydrates
that is
52%
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but
the least is with
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other
nutrients(5%)
instead
of
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saturated
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fat
in
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medium
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baked
potato.

While protein is second highest in
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medium
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baked
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potato
,
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saturated
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fat
is second from top in
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Macroni
consisting of 21% of whole. Glucose is 4% more in
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potato
in comparison
to that of
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,
also
protein is 14% less in
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Macroni
than
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Medium
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baked
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potatoes
.
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Though
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carbohydrates
is maximum in both the
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dishes
still
the amount of
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carbohydrates
in
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Macroni
is
slightly
more than
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medium
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baked
potato.

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IELTS academic The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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