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Sales of fairtrade labelled of coffee and bananas in 1999-2004.

The two table charts compare the data of fair-trade labelled coffee and bananas in five countries in two separate years (1999-2004). Overall, it is clear that the sale of coffee inclined during the period while banana firm showed profit from first three nations whereas sales were reduce in other two countries. Meanwhile, the both commodities got high sales in the United Kingdom. Regarding to high profit countries, In 1999, 3 million of euros received by Switzerland from coffee while the UK acquired 15 million of euros in banana. By contrast with Switzerland, coffee sales increased by over the three times in the UK, in 2004. As for banana sales, the UK rose by 47 million of Euros. As both countries obtained profit from the products in the last year. With regard to next three nations, in coffee sales, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden described marginal profit with average of around 2 million of euros whereas banana sales were reduce in Belgium and Sweden, however; Denmark had rise in it by 3. 4 million of eroes.

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