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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. awwOd

The two pie charts draw the conclusion of a survey of boys' and girls' cultural and leisure activities. al quantities of both sexes enjoyed listening to music, on the contrary a number of girls liked reading. There were also numerous differences in terms of the children's preferred sports. Turning to the first chart, we can observe that boys prefer playing a computer game is exercised by 17%. Skateboarding and listening to musicisure, with a proportion of 10%, equal to those on the first chart.

The two pie charts draw the conclusion of a survey of boys' and girls' cultural and leisure activities.

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IELTS academic The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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