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The given diagram illustrates the production process of hydroelectoricity which includes different fases of the electricity generation as well. The process starts with from the reseving the water at the dam and when the gates of the dam gets open the water flows from the penstock toward the turbines which are connected to generatores. Furthermore, When the water reaches the turbine then by the flow of water trbine swings. In the next step the genetare which is connected with the underwater turbine creates power which is being stored in the powerhouse. Afterwards the powr use to be distributed with the help of transformers and long power lines. Overall, The power production involves multiple stages and all the stages are crucial to get the outcome if a single step is missed the hydro pland could become useless.
The
given
diagram illustrates the production process of
hydroelectoricity
which includes
different
fases
of the electricity generation
as well
.

The process
starts
with from the
reseving
the
water
at the dam and when the gates of the dam
gets
open the
water
flows from the
penstock
toward the turbines which
are connected
to
generatores
.

Furthermore
, When the
water
reaches the turbine then by the flow of
water
trbine
swings. In the
next
step the
genetare
which
is connected
with the underwater turbine creates power which is
being stored
in the powerhouse. Afterwards the
powr
use to
be distributed
with the
help
of transformers and long power lines.

Overall
, The power production involves multiple stages and all the stages are crucial to
get
the outcome if a single step
is missed
the hydro
pland
could become useless.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity

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