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The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity BJJo9
The given diagram illustrates the production process of hydroelectoricity which includes different phases of the electricity generation as well. The process starts with from the reserving the water at the dam and when the gates of the dam gets open the water flows from the penstock toward the turbines which are connected to generators. Furthermore, When the water hits the turbine then by the flow of water trbine swings. In the next step the generator which is connected with the underwater turbine creates power which is being stored in the powerhouse. Afterwards the power use to be distributed with the help of transformers and long power lines. Overall, The power production involves multiple stages and all the stages are crucial to get the outcome if a single step is missed the hydro pland could become useless.
The
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diagram illustrates the production process of
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hydroelectoricity
which includes
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different
phases of the electricity generation
as well
.

The process
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starts
with from the reserving the
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water
at the dam and when the gates of the dam
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gets
open the
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water
flows from the
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penstock
toward the turbines which
are connected
to generators.

Furthermore
, When the
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water
hits the turbine then by the flow of
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water
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trbine
swings. In the
next
step the generator which
is connected
with the underwater turbine creates
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power
which is
being stored
in the powerhouse. Afterwards the
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power
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use to
be distributed
with the
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help
of transformers and long
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power
lines.

Overall
, The
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power
production involves multiple stages and all the stages are crucial to
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get
the outcome if a single step
is missed
the hydro
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pland
could become useless.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity

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4 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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