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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 6xxR0
This graph represents the number of Underground Station Passengers in London from 6 am to 10 pm. The graph is changing non-uniformly. The range of the passengers on the x-axis varies from 0 to 450 and Y-axis represents the time duration. According to the graph, there is a rapid growth in the number of passengers between 6 am to 8 am. A peak of 400 passengers can be seen at 8 am. After reaching the peak there is a fall in the graph from 9 am to 11 am. A constant number of travelers is observed during the noon. From 2 pm to 4 pm, a decline in passengers can be observed. But the graph again takes almost the peak value in the evening slot i. e from 5 to 7 pm. Not much of the passengers are noted during the night. From 8 pm onwards a rapid fall of the graph has taken place.
This
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represents the number of Underground Station
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Passengers
in London from 6 am to 10 pm.

The
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is changing non-
uniformly
. The range of the
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passengers
on the x-axis varies from 0 to 450 and Y-axis represents the time duration. According to the
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graph
, there is a rapid growth in the number of
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passengers
between 6 am to 8 am. A peak of 400
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passengers
can be
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seen
at 8 am.
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reaching the peak there is a fall in the
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graph
from 9 am to 11 am. A constant number of travelers
is observed
during the noon. From 2 pm to 4 pm, a decline in
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passengers
can
be observed
.
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But
the
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again takes almost the peak value in the evening slot i. e from 5 to 7 pm. Not much of the
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passengers
are noted
during the night. From 8 pm onwards a rapid fall of the
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has taken place.

IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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6.0
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