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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.

The following pie charts illustrate the cultural and leisure activities of boys and girls taken thorough a survey. Some activities are shared between both sexes while other are limited to a specific group. Overall, the both sexes enjoyed listening to music at an equal percentage of 10%; however the other activities such as computer games declined from 34% in boys to 16% in girls. And while the reading was at 21% in girls it sharply reduced sharply to a mere value of 2 % in boys. A major differences that can be seen between the two charts is skateboarding, basketball and soccer which is seen in the boys graph only. While the activities involving dancing, netball and gymnastics were more preferred among girls rather than boys. All in all it can be seen that some activities including listening to music and playing games and reading were present in both graphs the latter two in varying degrees. While some activities were solely preferred in some sex and not the other.
The following pie charts illustrate the cultural and leisure
activities
of
boys
and
girls
taken thorough a survey.
Some
activities
are shared
between both sexes while other
are limited
to a specific group.

Overall
, the both sexes enjoyed listening to music at an equal percentage of 10%;
however
the other
activities
such as computer games declined from 34% in
boys
to 16% in
girls
. And while the reading was at 21% in
girls
it
sharply
reduced
sharply
to a mere value of 2 % in
boys
. A major differences that can be
seen
between the two charts is skateboarding, basketball and soccer which is
seen
in the
boys
graph
only
. While the
activities
involving dancing, netball and gymnastics were more preferred among
girls
rather
than boys.

All in all it can be
seen
that
some
activities
including listening to music and playing games and reading were present in both graphs the latter two in varying degrees. While
some
activities
were
solely
preferred in
some
sex and not the other.
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IELTS academic The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.

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