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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.

The following pie charts illustrate the cultural and leisure activities of boys and girls taken thorough a survey. Some activities are shared between both sexes while other are limited to a specific group. Overall, the both sexes enjoyed listening to music at an equal percentage of 10%; however the other activities such as computer games declined from 34% in boys to 16% in girls. And while the reading was at 21% in girls it sharply reduced sharply to a mere value of 2 % in boys. A major differences that can be seen between the two charts is skateboarding, basketball and soccer which is seen in the boys graph only. While the activities involving dancing, netball and gymnastics were more preferred among girls rather than boys. All in all it can be seen that some activities including listening to music and playing games and reading were present in both graphs the latter two in varying degrees. While some activities were solely preferred in some sex and not the other.

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