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The given bar chart provide the data about survey of students about their subjects.

The given bar chart provide the data about survey of students about their subjects. PgKwJ
The horizontal bar graph reveals the information regarding surveyed students who studied distinct subjects in the course of a year(2003). To commence with, it can be evident from the bar chart that the most dominating count of students were seen in psychology, natural science and mathematics by the male students by 200. However, both engineering along with programing following the similar trend for the male students by the reduction of 50. Linguistics was the least studied subject by approximately 70. It is worth noticing that natural science was the leading subject among female students followed by psychology and linguistic by almost 70 and 120 respectively. Moving further, engineering contributed for 80 female students only. Whereas, programing was enrolled by 70 students. Mathematics was the subject by 40 female students at last. It could be deduced that the male mostly preferred subject were mathematics, natural science, and psychology while, females catagory was highest in natural science.
The horizontal bar graph reveals the information regarding surveyed
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who studied distinct
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in the course of a year(2003).

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students
were
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in psychology,
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natural
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science
and mathematics by the male
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students
by 200.
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, both engineering along with
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programing
following the similar trend for the male
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by the reduction of 50. Linguistics was the least studied
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subject
by approximately 70.

It is worth noticing that
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natural
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science
was the leading
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subject
among
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female
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followed by psychology and linguistic by almost 70 and 120
respectively
. Moving
further
, engineering contributed for 80
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female
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students
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. Mathematics was the
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by 40
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female
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at last.

It could
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that the male
mostly
preferred
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subject
were mathematics,
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natural
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, and psychology while,
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females
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