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The pie charts show the production of electricity units by fuel source in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts show the production of electricity units by fuel source in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000. gQ57
The given pie charts depicts data regarding the units of electricity by fuel source in two nations form 1980 to 2000. To sum up, it is evident that the most of electricity units generated by coal in both years over time, whereas no units electricity had produced by nuclear power. In contrast, in France, thr maximum units of electricity production by all fuel soruces in 1980, while in 2000 nuclear power was only produced the electricity units. More specifically, in 1980, 50 units of electricity were generated by coal, however the total electricity contributed by hydro power noted as 20 units and 36 units in each year. After that, the electricity was produced by natural gas and oil at 20 units and 10 units respectively. Then, the figure of natural gas and oil were decreased at 4 units in 2000. Moving further, in 1980, the total electricity production by all fuel was observed as 90 units in France. Next, in 2000, 126 units electricity produced by hydro power as campared to other sources. On the contrary, 25 units of electricity power produced by using coal and oil in same year.
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generated by coal in both years over time, whereas no
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production by all fuel
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contributed by hydro
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noted as 20
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and 36
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and 10
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in 2000. Moving
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production by all fuel
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in France.
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, in 2000, 126
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the production of electricity units by fuel source in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.

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