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The pie charts show the ownership of the house in UK

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The pie charts compare home ownership and renting for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms. In 1991, home owner were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, or more than over half of all homes. The next largest sector was social rented homes, amounting to 23% or nearly one-third of homes. The remaining homes were mostly privately rented (11%) with a tiny fraction being social housi ng (6%). Sixteen years later, in 2007, the number of home owners had risen to 70%, or almost three quarters of all homes. This was an increase of 10% compared with 1991. Much of the increase in home ownership can be explained by the decrease in social rented homes, which had dropped from 23% to 17%. The percentage of privately rented homes had remained unchanged at 11%. However, there were 5 million more homes in 2007 compared with 1991 so the number of rented homes had increased despite the same percentage. Social housing has decreased three-fold from 6% in 1991 to 2% in 2007, and it remains the least popular type of housing. (180 words)
The pie charts compare home ownership and renting for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms.

In 1991,
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home owner
were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, or more than over half of all
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homes
. The
next
largest sector was
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social
rented
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homes
, amounting to 23% or
nearly
one-third of
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homes
. The remaining
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homes
were
mostly
privately
rented (11%) with a tiny fraction being
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social
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housi ng
(6%).

Sixteen years later, in 2007, the number of
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home owners
had risen to 70%, or almost three quarters of all
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homes
. This was an increase of 10% compared with 1991. Much of the increase in home ownership can be
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explained
by the decrease in
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social
rented
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homes
, which had dropped from 23% to 17%.

The percentage of
privately
rented
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homes
had remained unchanged at 11%.
However
, there were 5 million more
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homes
in 2007 compared with 1991
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so
the number of rented
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homes
had increased despite the same percentage.
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Social
housing has decreased three-fold from 6% in 1991 to 2% in 2007, and it remains the least popular type of housing.

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