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The pie charts show the money spent of household in us in two different years

The pie charts show the money spent of household in us in two different years ORaPM
His ch He knew After the As they goe • Till now we Recently as She told me the helping our triem Because it is don Knowledge The fle charts provide information desting spent money on seven distinct Outageties 27. 03 disclete yea33 1936 cond 1996. The unit is in percentage To initiate coith, the maximum expendle cous spent on twort gories that is cars and feed also together they comprised of over 50% Subsequently, there wont adtunatic decrease spen EP spending money on food, that accouded for 54 percent in 1966, cwhich fell byth 14 percent in 1996. Furthermore, the spenting expense on cars that moted for 23% in 1966, which lose to almost double with 45% in the year 1946. teaut 3 Could 1% in 1966, In addition to this, the highest expense be seen on computers that is which soused to To percent in the next so years. Apart from that, the spending mome on eesteports that noticed for 71. in 1966. which inclined nearly double, with 14%. in 1996. Also, petrol and furnitive expenses cdeze louply_ sirailes that accounted for yy. and loy. in 1986, they slightly plunged kipproximately 8% in 1996. On the other hand, the money spent on books walth 67. in 1996 which dropped by 18. in 1996. Ovencell, it can be manifested from the thart that un inclined could be seen in spent expense on
His ch

He knew

After the

As
they goe


• Till
now
we

Recently as

She
told
me the

helping our
triem


Because
it is don

Knowledge

The
fle
charts provide information
desting
spent
money on seven distinct
Outageties
27. 03
disclete
yea33 1936
cond
1996. The unit is in
percentage


To initiate
coith
, the maximum
expendle
cous
spent
on
twort
gories
that is
cars and feed
also
together they comprised of over 50%
Subsequently
, there
wont
adtunatic
decrease spen
EP spending money on food, that
accouded
for 54 percent in 1966,
cwhich
fell
byth
14 percent in 1996.
Furthermore
, the
spenting
expense
on cars that
moted
for 23% in 1966, which lose to almost double with 45% in the year 1946.

teaut
3 Could 1% in 1966,
In addition
to this, the highest
expense
be
seen
on computers
that is
which soused
to To
percent in the
next
so
years. Apart from that, the spending
mome
on
eesteports
that noticed for 71.
in
1966.
which
inclined
nearly
double, with 14%.
in
1996.
Also
, petrol and
furnitive
expenses
cdeze
louply
_
sirailes
that accounted for
yy
. and
loy
.
in
1986, they
slightly
plunged
kipproximately
8% in 1996.
On the other hand
, the money
spent
on books
walth
67.
in
1996 which dropped by 18.
in
1996.

Ovencell
, it can
be manifested
from the
thart
that
un
inclined could be
seen
in
spent
expense
on
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