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These maps illustrate change in the village in 1962, 1985, and now.

These maps illustrate change in the village in 1962, 1985, and now. m3a6K
These maps show how Meadowside Village and Fonton change in three different periods (1962, 1985, and present). Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the village has modernized to become considerably more attractive with numerous fancy building in the center of this village. In 1962, the area of Meadowside was slightly smaller with narrow path to the north and western. In addition, Fonton was also small with railway from southern to north. In the next period (1985), the village has expanded with additional leisure complex and housing state on the northern of the road that has become larger as well. There was a new large road that stretches between Meadowside and Fonton, and then a new super store was added to the south of the village. At present, the areas of countryside and Fonton have been combined to become a larger suburb. Likewise, there are plethora of building has been constructed in the center such as hotel and station in the north of road, and business park has been located to the south of the road. Finally, there is presently an additional railway from east to the station.
These maps
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Meadowside
Village and
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Fonton
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in three
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periods (1962, 1985, and present). Looking from
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the village has modernized to become
considerably
more attractive with numerous fancy building in the center of this village.

In 1962, the area of
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Meadowside
was
slightly
smaller with narrow path to the north and western.
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Fonton
was
also
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small
with railway from southern to north.
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In
the
next
period (1985), the village has expanded with additional leisure complex and housing state on the northern of the
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road
that has become larger
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as
well. There was a new large
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road
that stretches between
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Meadowside
and
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Fonton
, and then a new super store was
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added
to the south of the village.

At present, the areas of countryside and
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Fonton
have
been combined
to become a larger suburb.
Likewise
, there are plethora of building has
been constructed
in the center such as hotel and station in the north of
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road
, and business park has
been located
to the south of the
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road
.
Finally
, there is
presently
an additional railway from east to the station.

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