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maps of present time building of office and prediction for future

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The infographic representation of the data in the form of maps reveals the changes which is predicted in office building. On a whole, it is clear from the graph that a lot of infrastructe changes is projected. The main projected change is introducing of meeting area in the east side of building. Now turning towards the details, In terms of present structure of office, there are a kitchen, canteen and storeroom located in the north of the office. The main entrance is situated at the west side of office, there is another entrance in the south-west. The four office rooms are situated at the south part of office building. As far as the future map is concerned, it is estimated to be converted kitchen and canteen into office rooms. The coffee machine and meeting area will be constructed where the grass area used to be. It is also planned to be sifted entrance from the south-east to middle of the south part of building. Outdoor seating area and chairs will be added at the main entrance in the west side of building in the future
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IELTS academic maps of present time building of office and prediction for future

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